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Having students write poetry on a regular basis frees them from some of the constraints of regular academic writing. In so doing, it can introduce them to the joy, power and relevance of verbal creative expression.
At the same time, poetry — particularly free verse — can present an accessible personal context for application of the writing process, pre-writing, composition, editing, revision and reflection. Even when responding to a specified prompt, poetry offers limitless latitude for expression. Sometimes even unconsciously, young writers learn purposeful use of language and gain a sense that words do, in fact, matter.
I write with my poetry students every day and the experience is just as therapeutic for me as it is for them. This aspect of writing and sharing compositions aloud can be an epiphany for many. We share personal stories and perspectives that might otherwise be glossed over or flat-out buried. Some will dig deeper than they ever have, revealing themselves in new ways. This captivates and inspires others to do the same, and together we discover courage we never realized we possessed.
From a language arts perspective, poetic writing is additionally a perfect foundation on which to base conversations on the practicalities of rhythm, word choice, tone, pacing, imagery, and alliteration. All have application in prose, whether narrative, analytical or informative writing. Think of an excellent nonfiction book you couldn’t put down, where the words had a lyrical, captivating buoyancy that just carried you along. There is poetry in good prose, whether written or spoken.
I hope you enjoy the following sample of some recent work by four Burchell High School students. They skillfully demonstrate how poetry is a tool for living — one they will carry long beyond high school.
I Am From
Anonymous
I am from
Gravel roads and mobile homes
Un-manicured lawns
And chained dogs
Gray skies and walking to the mailbox
I am from
Tension and fear
Secret phone calls and hushed voices
Strangers’ houses
Concerned friends
And the close dark of closets
Sleepless nights
Wide eyes
Uncertainty and dread
But this is not all there is to me
I am from
blazing fires and worn clothes
Protecting arms
Guiding voices
Books of intrigue, loss, adventure
Hot food
Cold drinks
Filling and whole
I am from
Soft grass and unrelenting weeds
Mesmerizing sunsets
Stars like a thousand tiny lanterns
Waiting
Protecting
Pine forests
Gentle deer
My life has been tentative
But it is full.
A Pin Drops
By Auto Garrett
A pin drops
The room is silent
The world pauses for a moment
Everything stops
After a single second
A bark of laughter shoves its way into the air
Voices of many join in
Peals of laughter resound in the ears of a broken boy
He lays there on the ground
Broken, defeated
Unable to get away
Blood drips from his temple
But no one asks if he is OK
The other who attacked
Joins the crowd and his friends
He laughs, too
As if what he’d just done was nothing
He walks away
And with him the crowd goes, too
The broken, beaten boy
Stands, but leans on a wall for support
How sad it is
That in a world of billions of people
The only thing that holds him up
Is a cold, unloving wall.
Letter to the
Present Me
By Chance Gagnon
Dear pair of eyes looking back at me from the mirror,
We have always been that kid at
The rear of the class.
The one who gets beaten daily,
By us.
But no more.
Today we will momentarily stop the press
And resolve our differences.
Me and myself,
In constant battle over who we are.
Well, I’m telling myself now
That we can come out of our strife
And drop the knife that we used for slashing at ourselves,
All the while gnashing our teeth.
Together we will sheath that blade of woe,
Stop tearing ourselves apart,
Bandage the stubbed toe,
And re-glue the many times shattered heart.
Today I call a truce with you,
To stop the coup of self-hate,
We need to make up,
Before it’s too late.
Sincerely,
Me
Make-Up
By Tristan Thompson
Make-up… Hide your face.
Wear it like a mask,
an everyday task.
She wakes
then starts the morning process,
stares into the mirror,
a little eye liner, eye shadow,
still a work in progress.
Going through the day,
a compliment here, a compliment there,
maybe a little stare.
But she’s unaware of the true beauty underneath the mask.
So… by the end of the day,
she washes it all away,
just to start again the next day.